Part B
Type or copy and paste your revised informational text draft in the student response box, then read it aloud. As you read,
pause to edit the draft using standard English conventions. Remember to follow these editing strategies:
• include a variety of complete, controlled sentences
avoid unintentional commas splices, run-ons, and fragments
risine and editing checklist 2. Spend about 15 minutes editing your draft.

Answer:

Here is Sutton’s edited informational text about Alexander Fleming:

It is very rare to find a person who changes the way people view the world. Alexander Fleming was one such figure. What we know of today as penicillin, a cure for many infections, did not exist until 1928, when Fleming's brilliant and innovative mind discovered it.

Fleming had a keen interest in the field of medicine as a young man. In 1906, he began working as a researcher at St. Mary's Hospital in London, England, under the guidance of Almroth Wright, a bacteriologist. Fleming served in the Royal Army Medical Corps during World War I and worked with wounded soldiers. There, he realized that the liquid antiseptics used to treat wounds severely affected a person's ability to fight off bacterial infections. He believed that wounds should not be treated with antiseptics but rather kept clean and dry. However, his advice mostly went unheard.

In 1918, Fleming returned to St. Mary's as the assistant director of the St. Mary's Inoculation Department. Ten years later, in September 1928, he made a startling discovery related to the bacteria Staphylococcus aureus, which can cause harmful infections in humans. Fleming had left the bacteria unattended in a petri dish and noticed that it had developed an unknown mold around it. When he studied the mold, he was surprised to find that it was a type of antibiotic, a substance that can kill bacteria or stop if from growing. He named this discovery penicillin and spread word of its clinical potential to treat bacterial infections. With the help of scientists Howard Florey and Ernst Chain from the University of Oxford, he managed to stabilize and purify penicillin for public use.

The discovery of penicillin revolutionized the medical world and turned Fleming into a hero. In 1943, he was elected a Fellow of the Royal Society and received the knighthood one year later. In 1945, Fleming, Chain, and Florey were awarded the Nobel Prize for the discovery of penicillin and their contributions to the field of medicine.

In later years, Sir Alexander Fleming wrote numerous papers on bacteriology, chemotherapy, and immunology, which were published in medical and scientific journals all around the world. Fleming died in 1955 in London, but his name and contributions are celebrated to this day.

Explanation:

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Explanation:

The author's strategy in the first two sentences is to flatter those who would criticize popular opinions Answer A: flatter those who would criticize popular opinions A incite readers to act in a manner inconsistent with their beliefs Answer B: incite readers to act in a manner inconsistent with their beliefs B moralize about the injustices present in society Answer C: moralize about the injustices present in society C build a logical argument and support it with facts from history

The cloud sailed across the blue sky. Personification or hyperbole

PLEASE HELP NO LINKS OR FILES
Write a speech about a current practice — anything people commonly do in society today — that you think the people of the future will see as a form of discrimination. What are some practices that are legal today that you think limit people's rights? Do you yourself feel you're being treated unfairly? You'll support your ideas with evidence you find through research. You'll also enhance your speech with audio or video.
As you craft your speech, make sure all your sources are credible. Also make clear to your audience which source each piece of information comes from. But besides just presenting evidence, you should try to move your audience using rhetoric. Logos, pathos, and ethos are all appeals you can make as you present.
Your speech should include the following elements:
A claim that states which practice you think the people of the future will consider a form of discrimination
At least two supporting points that back up your claim
Evidence from credible sources that you find through research
Transitions that link your ideas and make it clear to the audience when you're moving from one topic to the next
An audio or visual element that either presents evidence or appeals to the audience in some way
An introduction that grabs the audience's attention and presents the claim; a body that presents evidence from sources and makes supporting points; and a conclusion that reviews your ideas and leaves the audience with a lasting impression

The antecedent is the word for which a pronoun stands.

True or False

Which of the following sentences does not belong in this process paragraph?

There are a few tips to remember when you're working
through a math word problem. The first time you read
through a problem, make sure you clearly identify what the
question asks. I have misunderstood problems way too
many times. Read through the problem a second time, and
pull out the necessary data to set up an equation or other
method of solving the problem. Once you have your
equation set up, perform the arithmetic to find the correct
answer. Following these steps will help to improve your
mathematical accuracy in word problems.

What technique is used in this excerpt from the "I Have Dream" speech? "One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity." A metaphor B simile OC personifiation OD hyperbole​

'I am offering this poem to' how does writer present the speakers feeling of love

Type of sentence made up of two independent clauses.
O independent sentence
complex sentence
compound sentence
O dependent sentence

based on what happens in Julius Ceaser which statement best describes the relationship between the argument between Brutus and Cassius Brutus's internal conflict?


A) both arise from the fact that Brutus truly wants to do what is best for Rome.


B) both are signs that Brutus is dishonorable and untrustworthy.


C)both reflect the curse on Ceaser, since both of these men are assassins.

PLEASE HELP!!!!

What decision does the head chieftain make about the boy's visions?
He heeds the boy's warning yet threatens the boy if they do not come true.
He does not take the boy seriously and ignores him
He becomes angry and jails the boy as an enemy spy:
He laughs that someone so young could possibly have such visions.

What is Kennedy’s answer to the question “Why the moon”

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which word belongs in the blank?

The lights will go out __ the electricity will go out.

because, after, or if

This exaggeration is an example of____

No one can beat level 8 on that game!
simile
alliteration
hyperbole
metaphor​

The poem on the Statue of Liberty’s base conveyed a welcoming message to immigrants who arrived at Ellis Island in the early 1900s. But immigrants did not find life in the United States easy, and they often felt unwelcome.

Suppose you are a teenager who entered the United States at Ellis Island in 1910. Write a letter to your cousin back home about your first year in the United States. In your letter, write about

the opportunities you had.
the challenges you faced.
your impressions of the United States.
Convey your ideas clearly, using standard English.

This question has two parts. First, answer Part A. Then, answer question 2 Part B.

Part A

Which sentence from the text uses persuasive language to create an appeal to emotion?

A. More than 100,000 people are currently waiting for an organ transplant to save their lives. (paragraph 1)
B. They wait day after day after day to hear that some unfortunate person has lost their life, but generously agreed to save theirs. (paragraph 1)
C. And the wait list to get them is ever-growing. (paragraph 1)
D. When someone dies, their remains are typically either cremated or put in a casket and buried. (paragraph 3)
Group of answer choices

how do you know when to trust ourselves over others?

The following question refers to the text Gus and Frieda: Geniuses at Recess. Read the paragraph and answer the question below it. The paragraphs have been labeled A, B, and C. The sentences in each paragraph have been numbered to help you identify them more easily. Gus and Frieda: Geniuses at Recess (A)/>!" Gus and Frieda were not enjoying recess. (2) They considered themselves athletically challenged. B) To make things worse, the young geniuses' teacher asked them to play dodge ball. (B)/>() Panic showed on Gus's face. (2) Frieda was worried, too. (3) They both feared they would fail epicly. (Cy>(1) Gus and Frieda studyed the situation then got an idea. (2) when no one was looking, they replaced themselves with identical robots.
The plan worked terrifically, and they dodged disaster for the day. What statement is true about paragraph A? (5 points)

There is an error sentence number 1.
There is an error in sentence number 2.
There is an error in sentence number B.
There are no errors in paragraph A.

No links! please just say the answer here
Please help I have a C rn!! ​

As he shook my hand, his coat fell open to expose a bright red satin shirt with a beaded bolo tie under the collar. His get-up wasn’t out of place on the reservation, but it sure was here, and I wanted to sink right through the pavement.

“Hi,” I muttered with my head down. I tried to pull my hand away when I felt his bony hand trembling, and looked up to see fatigue in his face. I felt like crying. I couldn’t think of anything to say so I picked up Grandpa’s suitcase, took his arm, and guided him up the driveway to our house.

Which detail from the text best supports the claim that Grandpa’s surprise visit creates a conflict for Martin?

Martin looks up and sees fatigue in Grandpa’s face.
Martin puts his head down and tries to pull away his hand.
Martin shakes Grandpa’s hand and says hi.
Martin picks up Grandpa’s suitcase and guides him up the driveway.

Which sentence BEST states a theme of the poem?
(.A.) All living things share similar characteristics

(.B.) Nature is both distressing and fascinating.

(.C.) Breaks in a routine can cause harm and confusion

(D.) The presence of danger requires immediate action

Poem is called " Snake"​

Who's your favourite character in the movie,'Titanic'.​

In the organizer below, analyze the original and revised research questions. What was wrong with the original, and why is the revised question better?

foreshadowing in rain rain go away

Why did the factory likely employ suck questionable practices?

Can someone please help??
Choose the sentence that uses correct punctuation.

Choose the correct sentence.
a. The bad attitude of other people makes me unhappy I like to stay happy.
b. The bad attitude of other people makes me unhappy, I like to stay happy.
c. The bad attitude of other people makes me unhappy, and I like to stay
happy.

choose the sentence that contains subject-verb agreement.

Choose the correct sentence.
a. Everyone in the group, including Hernando, enjoy dancing salsa
b. Everyone in the group, including Hernando, enjoys dancing salsa.

Each of the following sentences contains a blank. Choose the answer that best completes the sentence.

College students should study hard, work part-time, and _____
a. go to class on time.
b. they should go to class on time.
c. going to class on time.
Choose the sentence in which the underlined irregular verb is used correctly.

For the following questions, select the choice that is a correct example of subordination.

Choose the correct sentence.
a. Therefore, she spends time in Pine Bluff, her hometown every winter break.
b. Therefore she spends time in Pine Bluff her hometown, every winter break.
c. Therefore, she spends time in Pine Bluff, her hometown, every winter break.
Each of the following sentences contains a blank. Choose the answer that best completes the sentence.

The teachers _____ the classes as a team.
a. teaches
b. taught
c. has teached

Which part of the passage is factual evidence? The school needs to do something about the number of squirrels around the parking lot. They keep leaving acorns all over everyone's windshields, and people don't like seeing squirrels everywhere they look. The situation has gotten out of hand

How do you properly quote a website? My teacher's example was: "You may say something like this: Chopin writes, "QUOTE." This shows us that...." What if the author isn't referenced?

Read the excerpt from "A White Heron" by Sarah Orne Jewett then answer the question:


"Suddenly this little woods-girl is horror-stricken to hear a clear whistle not very far away. Not a bird’s whistle, which would have a sort of friendliness, but a boy’s whistle, determined, and somewhat aggressive. Sylvia left the cow to whatever sad fate might await her, and stepped discreetly aside into the bushes, but she was just too late. The enemy had discovered her, and called out in a very cheerful and persuasive tone, "Halloa, little girl, how far is it to the road?" and trembling Sylvia answered almost inaudibly, "A good ways."


She did not dare to look boldly at the tall young man, who carried a gun over his shoulder, but she came out of her bush and again followed the cow, while he walked alongside."


In at least 150 words, explain the symbolic role that the hunter plays to Sylvia in this story.

How does Finny's absence change Gene's behavior at school?

More and more people _______ (travel) to Switzerland these days. fill in correct verb form