Any writer can tell a reader what is happening in a story. Good writers show readers what is happening by creating pictures in readers’ minds. They do this by using sensory language to create vivid details. These details allow readers to connect to images, actions, and scenes through their senses. Sensory language and vivid details improve the style and diction of writing. Examples of sensory language are

words related to sight: glittering, bright, blurred, shadowy, grimy, hazy
words related to sound: thump, cackle, roar, screech, howl, creak, buzz
words related to touch: scratchy, hot, greasy, icy, fuzzy, velvety
words related to taste: creamy, rotten, salty, sweet, refreshing, zesty
words related to smell: musty, acrid, fragrant, old, perfumed, rancid
Prompt:

Rewrite and then post the following paragraph to include sensory language. Be sure to choose words that create vivid details that create connections to readers’ senses.

The alarm went off, and I got out of bed. I stretched and walked to the window to open the blinds. Light entered the room. I could smell breakfast cooking, so I walked to the kitchen. My mom was standing at the stove, making bacon. I sat down at the table and got ready to eat.

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Answer 1

Answer and Explanation:

The instructions in the question already offer an explanation of what sensory language is. All we need to do now is rewrite the paragraph. First, let's underline every detail that can be turned into sensory language:

The alarm went off, and I got out of bed. I stretched and walked to the window to open the blinds. Light entered the room. I could smell breakfast cooking, so I walked to the kitchen. My mom was standing at the stove, making bacon. I sat down at the table and got ready to eat.

Now, let's use words that appeal to the senses to rewrite the actions above:

I woke up to the earsplitting shriek of the alarm clock and got out of bed. My stiff muscles and joints seemed to thank me as I pushed and pulled, stretching them loose. I walked to the window, opened the blinds, and let the glowing sun greet me. As I took a deep breath, I could smell the fragrant breakfast, so I soared to the kitchen. My mom was standing at the stove, bacon sizzling in the frying pan before her. I sat down at the table and got ready to eat.


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Read the paragraph and respond to the question:

Learning how to ride a bike is no easy task. Most people learn as children and mount their first bicycle with training wheels mounted on the sides of
the back tires. Those training wheels eventually come off. When that happens, usually someone runs behind the bicycle, holding the back of the seat
as the rider learns to balance on two wheels. As the runner runs back and forth down the street, the rider eventually picks up on how to lean to stay
up on two wheels. Eventually, the runner lets go of the seat, and the rider rides off on his or her own.

What is the central idea of this passage?

A. Learning how to run behind a new rider
B. How to take training wheels off of a bicycle
C. Learning how to ride a two wheel bicycle
D. none of the above

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Explanation:

the answer is c

Which one would melt first
1. Get two ice cubes and two plastic bags
2. seal one ice cube in each bag
3.put one bag on the table.put the other bag in a cooler, lunch bag or thermos
4.Make a prediction about which ice cube will last longer
5.Check each bag after 10 minutes and record what you see
6.After another 10 minutes check each bag again. Record what you see. Keep watching the ice in the bags until both cubes have melted.
7.Which ice cube melted first the one on the table or the one in the insulated bad THERE IS NO PICTURE BTW!!!

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The one on the table

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Question 1
Part A
How should the sentence "I'm highly honored! be interpreted by the reader?
"oh, indeed! I'm highly honored!" (paragraph 27)

A. It should be read as an ironic statement because Richard Kennedy is not being sincere.
B. It should be taken literally because Richard Kennedy is touched by the doctor's reassurance
C. It should be seen a humorous because Richard Kennedy is trying to make the doctor laugh.
D. It should be regarded as an exaggeration because Richard Kennedy is only slightly honored

Part B
Select the detail from the passage that supports the answer in Part A
A. "holding out the copy of the Daily Telegraph"
B. "the gallant scot gave way to a genuine explosion of wrath
C. "the Scotchman gave a leap that a wild goat would not have been ashamed of"
D. "stood speechless with amazement"

2. What is the meaning of the word conceive as it is used in this sentence from the passage?
"to prevent the greatest piece of folly that ever was conceived." (paragraph 17)
A. To understand clearly
B. to develop an idea
C. to have an opinion
D. to begin or originate

3. How does the author develop a central idea of the passage in paragraphs 1 through 5?
A. By explaining the differenced between Kennedy and Ferguson, the author develops the idea that they were once much more alike
B. By describing the early friendship between Kennedy and Ferguson, the author develops the idea that they were once much more alike
C. By comparing and contrasting Kennedy and Ferguson, the author develops the ideas that Kennedy worries about Ferguson being in danger.
D. By telling the history of Kennedy and Ferguson, the author develops the idea that they have grown tired of each other.

4. A bark is a small ship. what does the author mean to tie up his bark for life?
"So, Kennedy besought the doctor to tie up his bark for life, having done enough for science, and to much for the gratitude of men." (paragraph 6)
A. To pun an end to his explorations.
B. to stop traveling by boat
C. to halt his experiments on transportation
D. To tie his boat more securely to the dock.

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Answer:

1.A  

Explanation:

The answer to the given questions are as follows:

1). part A - B

part B - C

2). D

3). A

4). A

Five Weeks in a Balloon

In the given excerpt, the author develops the idea of an association between Ferguson and Kennedy irrespective of the distinctions they possessed in terms of life.

These help the readers understand the viewpoint of the author and associate with the situation accordingly.

In the context of the details, the above answers are correct.

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Read the following passage and answer the question.

Championships were coming up and the underdog team had made the playoffs! Their first game was a surprise to everyone when the underdog team beat the other one by 20 points! Tonight was the semi-finals, and if the underdogs won, it would be the best their team had ever done.
Based on the previous passage, what is the most likely outcome of the game?

The underdogs will lose, but only by a couple of points.
The two teams will tie.
The underdogs will lose badly.
The underdogs will win.

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Answer:

The third option is the answer I believe

Explanation:

It's difficult for a team that usually loses to win against the second best team especially if they were surprised and have a history of losing.

Answer:

The underdogs will win.

Explanation:

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Help Please!!!!! Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph?
Laura had had enough of Nelly's arrogance and bragging.
She pushed Nelly into the creek. She knew the creek was
filled with leeches.
A. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogant bragging, so she pushed
Nelly into the creek, even though she knew it was full of leeches.
B. Laura pushed Nelly into the leech-filled creek. This action was
because Laura was sick of Nelly's bragging.
C. Although Laura knew the creek was full of leeches, she pushed
Nelly in anyway. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogance and
bragging.
D. None of the above
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B
Explanation: None of the other answers logically follow the order of events and do not sound as fluid as B
Let me know if it is correct

Answer:A

Explanation:

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A snack and a _______ serve the same purpose: to eat something light before a strong meal.

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cattail
cider
nap

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Answer: Nap

Explanation:

Both a snack and a nap serve the same purpose because they are light versions of a main dish/ action. A snack is a light version of a strong meal that is eaten to keep the body going till meal time.

A nap serves the same purpose because it is a short rest that the body takes to recover and refresh before a longer sleep can be taken later which is generally at night.




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There are two types of violations in volleyball. What are they called?

1. Player and Coach Violation
2. Penalty and Play Violation
3. Technical and Player Violation
4. Technical and Playing Violation

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Answer:

I'm pretty sure is Number 2! I used to play volleyball a few years back, but im not 100% sure.

Explanation:

Answer:

2 you need a play violation and penalty

Explanation:

Write a letter to your classmate who has just survived afatal accident, describing how the class felt when they haerd the news​

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Answer:

298-789 Pillar Road,

Brooklyn Road,

New York City, United States.

14th August 2020

Dear Liza,

       Hi, Liza. I hope you're holding up well after that terrible accident. I'm writing in behalf of our class.

The class had been so shocked when Miss Nancy told us about your family getting to an accident. Some girls, like Jessie and Polly, even burst into tears. We are glad to hear you only broke your leg and had some minor injuries though, as far worse things could have happened.

We missed you a lot in class today. Hayley, Ronald, and I took turns copying an extra set of notes for you in every class. Gemma helped you pass up the assignments you left in your locker. James did your classroom duty for you. So, don't worry about school, and get good rest!

We heard about your sister passing away, and we're very sorry for your loss. When you are ready, feel free to call any of us and have a talk! We are most willing to accompany you through your grieving.

To sum it all up, we miss you incredibly, and we wish you and your family all the best in recovering. Hope you come back to our sides soon.      

With love,

Caitlin and Class 7 Beta                                    

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Which of the following best states Romeo’s motivation for
drinking poison in The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet, Act V?

A.He believes Juliet is dead and wants to spend eternity with her.
B.He is upset over his banishment.
C.He believes that it is only through his death that Juliet will find
happiness in life.
D.He is plagued by guilt over Tybalt’s death.

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Answer:

A. He believes Juliet is dead and wants to spend eternity with her.

Explanation:

a- Rosa Parks
b- Medgar Evans
c- Ella Barker
d- Thurgood Marshall
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Answer:

D. Thurgood Marshall

Explanation:

After founding the NAACP Legal Defense Fund in 1940, Marshall became the key strategist in the effort to end racial segregation, in particular meticulously challenging Plessy v. Ferguson, the Court-sanctioned legal doctrine that called for “separate but equal” structures for white and blacks.

Source: naacpldf.org

what do you think about in this generation of 2021​

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Weird, dead, we will all die

hi! i just need a positive, pokémon-go related title for my essay!

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The World Over Heaven, STANDO POWA!

Answer:

I choose you: (enter what your essays gonna be about)

Explanation:

I mean its positive lol :) if thats not what your looking for then sorry

21. Read the following scenario and determine what type of irony is present.
“Today was a very cold and bitter day, as cold and bitter as a cup of hot chocolate; if
the cup of hot chocolate had vinegar added to it and were placed in a refrigerator for
several hours."
The example is what form of irony?
a. verbal irony
b. dramatic irony
c. situational irony

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Answer:

verbal irony

Explanation:

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A food worker washes her hands before taking a torn package of dry pasta from the food storage area. She dumps the pasta in a stainless steel pot to cook. What hazard is most likely to make the pasta unsafe to eat?

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Answer:

The germs from the already opened pasta package

Read the excerpt from "The Gift of the Magi."

Where she stopped the sign read: "Mme. Sofronie. Hair Goods of All Kinds." One flight up Della ran, and collected herself, panting. Madame, large, too white, chilly, hardly looked the "Sofronie."

"Will you buy my hair?" asked Della.

"I buy hair," said Madame. "Take yer hat off and let’s have a sight at the looks of it."

Down rippled the brown cascade.

"Twenty dollars," said Madame, lifting the mass with a practised hand.

Madame Sofronie’s character is most developed through

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Read the excerpt from "The Gift of the Magi."

Where she stopped the sign read: "Mme. Sofronie. Hair Goods of All Kinds." One flight up Della ran, and collected herself, panting. Madame, large, too white, chilly, hardly looked the "Sofronie."

"Will you buy my hair?" asked Della.

"I buy hair," said Madame. "Take yer hat off and let's have a sight at the looks of it."

Down rippled the brown cascade.

"Twenty dollars," said Madame, lifting the mass with a practised hand.

Madame Sofronie's character is most developed through

direct characterization, using her words and feelings.

indirect characterization, using her thoughts and action.

direct characterization, describing her physical appearance.

indirect characterization, describing her personality.

Answer:

direct characterization, describing her physical appearance.

Explanation:

Answer:

c

Explanation:

1. For each of the following, choose the correct sentence.

A) The company handbook states, “All employees must give 30 days’ notice”.
B) The company handbook states, “All employees must give 30 days’ notice.

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Answer:

I believe it's a, sorry if i am wrong

Explanation:

Read this excerpt of
"From Blossoms":
From laden boughs, from hands,
from sweet fellowship in the bins,
comes nectar at the roadside, succulent
peaches we devour, dusty skin and all,
comes the familiar dust of summer, dust we eat.
Which word helps create a positive mood?
• A. sweet
O B. dust
O C. bins
• D. devour

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Answer:

A. sweet

Explanation:

According to the excerpt from "From Blossoms", the author narrates getting nectar at the roadside and the familiar dust of summer.

The word from the excerpt that helps create a positive mood is "sweet".

How is this case literally about black and white? How is this case black and white, figuratively speaking? please help

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Answer:

It is easy to tell the difference between the colors black and white, just like it is easy to tell that Tom Robinson is not guilty

Atticus simply means that the case is pretty straightforward.

Explanation:

Answer. When Atticus says, “This case is as simple as black and white,” he is referring to the racial aspect of the case, as well as Tom’s obvious innocence (Lee 124). Throughout the trail, there was no evidence presented that would have proved that Tom Robinson was guilty of assaulting and raping Mayella Ewell.

Which of these sentences would most likely be used on a Web site that tells
the history of chocolate?
A. You only have to follow these simple steps for making hot
chocolate.
B. People once believed that chocolate helped to fight sickness.
C. We believe that our chocolate tastes better than any other kind
sold today
D. If you've never tasted dark chocolate, you're missing out on a real
treat.

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Answer:

B.

Explanation:

History is about the past. Saying once is refering to the past.

Great Answers :) Last Question!

If you could go anywhere right now, where would it be and why?

You could call me Lizzie!

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Answer:

l would go to Dubai necessarily becos l have never gone out of the country and that wud b a dream country for me

Answer:

I would go to Paris because I wanna see the Effiel Tower up close.

what was presented before Mr.Brownlow spoke?
(story of Oliver twist)​

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Answer:

The sworn book was presented before Mr. Brownlow before he spoke.

Explanation:

"Oliver Twist" is the second novel of British writer, Charles Dickens. The story is about an orphan named Oliver Twist.

In chapter 11, Mr. Brownlow appears before the judge to appear against the boy, and confess that he was mistaken in identifying the boy as a thief. But before he spoke, he was asked to sworn by the magistrate.

Therefore, a sworn book was presented before Mr. Brownlow before he spoke.

fill in the blanks with suitable adverb phrases. these books should be mailed​

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Answer:

there is no file

Explanation:

so we cant answer the question

grayson perry years of career ​

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Answer:

Grayson Perry: Biography and Artistic Career. Grayson Perry (Born March 24, 1960 in Chelmsford, England) is an English artist specializing in pottery, winner of the Turner Prize in 2003, an award given to the best visual artist in Britain of the year. His art uses his childhood as inspiration, which led him to develop a taste for transvestite in his teens (Vogue, 2014).

Explanation:

i got this from life persona . com

Which best describes a rural area?
A. vendors selling along a busy street
B. private cars racing with each other
c. muddy road with potholes​

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Answer:

A rural area is an open swath of land that has few homes or other buildings, and not very many people. A rural areas population density is very low. Many people live in a city, or urban area.

Explanation:

your answer is C

ingredients for sporge Cake​

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Answer:

Flour, Milk Solids, Egg Whites will make your cake tougher or stronger

Water, Liquid Milk, Liquid Eggs, Syrups, Liquid Sugars

Flour, Milk Solids, Instant Starch, Gums, Egg Whites

Salt, Sugar, Cocoa, Chocolate, Butter, Vanilla, other flavors

Explanation:

Answer:

Sponge cake (Victoria sponge) at a 2014 village fête baking competition

Type| |Cake

Course | | Dessert, tea

Main ingredients| |Wheat flour, sugar, egg whites, baking powder

Variations | | Rice flour

To use a Next Actions List, you should do which of the following?

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Answer:

hears the answer hope it helps

definition of metaphor

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Answer:

Hey!

Explanation:

A metaphor is a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.

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Have a AWESOME Friday!♥

Which of the following examples represents a flat character?
A. Madeline constantly encounters difficulty when she tries to work
with her twin sister, Margo, because their personalities are
opposites.
B. Ryan strives to gain acceptance at her new school, despite being
very different from the other students.
C. Delvis remains the fun-loving, goofy neighbor and friend to the
main character, Dallas, throughout the story.
O D. Jon begins his cross-country cycling trip positive and excited
about the experience. By the end of the trip, he is bitter and
exhausted.

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Answer:

Explanation:

D is not your answer. Someone who is bitter and exhausted has learned something that made them bitter and exhausted. They have changed.

C is not your answer. We have a hook here. We're drawn in to find out why she is different. That's not a flat character.

A is not your answer. These twins have a conflict. It is a natural way to develop a story.

B as charming as he sounds, his charm and wit lead us nowhere. He is a foil for the main character. Our pleasure in him is only momentary. B is the answer.

Answer:

B

Explanation:

Select the correct text in the passage.

Read this paragraph from a post on a parks department blog about how local businesses can be environmentally friendly. Which sentence is a call to action?

Being environmentally friendly is easy and even cost-effective. If your company takes small steps now, it can reap many benefits down the line. Take a few simple steps, such as having recycling bins at every desk, using hand dryers in restrooms, and encouraging the use of reusable plastic utensils. Follow us on our social media page to learn more about how to create greener office spaces.

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Answer: Follow us on our social media page to learn more about how to create greener office spaces

Explanation: he is directly telling us what to do next

Answer:

"Take a few simple steps, such as having recycling bins at every desk, using hand dryers in restrooms, and encouraging the use of reusable plastic utensils."

Explanation:

Edmentum

The day was scorching hot and bone dry, the air smelled like burnt toast, and everyone’s nerves were on edge. Only Zeke was calm. He patrolled the perimeter, making jokes about…………..

Continue the story please, at least 3 sentences or more

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how cool and moist the air was as everyone turned bright red in second hand embarrassed and anger. The day boiled till the sun set, it was breezy and airy making everyone comfy as the moon began to shine out from the cool orange, blue, and red sky turning into a blue-ish black hole with billions of stars far out. Zeke brought out his guitar and started roasting s’mores with his friend while singing lightly. (You could change things if you like this was just last minute)
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